Saturdays are like that

With great promise it started
This Saturday of mine
Fresh coffee and my pjs
On long past nine

Nothing was pressing
No deadline to meet
Anything was possible
On this day of retreat

I dabbled in this
I played with that
I searched for a thing
While I really just sat

We accomplished a little
On this day that was free
We enjoyed it a lot
My Saturday and me


One thought on “Saturdays are like that

  1. I love it! I would only suggest one change, the first line. Instead of “It started with great promise” try “With great promise it started”. Same words just seemed to flow a little more easily off my tongue.

    But, as I said at first, I love it! I wish I could have a Saturday like that. Someday…

    love ya… toma

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